I have just re read the story I was so chuffed at writing. It is shite. Really, I am not being modest at all, I can be quite arrogant about my writing, I know when I have done something good. This is utter drivel. I had been planning on submitting it but no fucking way. Don’t know if I should have a major rewrite or just dump it. I’m working on a second that seems better, and I have a feeling that it’s the third one that should be decent if I can pull it off. Ho hum.